tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4944390983421509153.post987844584468935446..comments2023-03-26T00:47:34.658-07:00Comments on A Lightsaber and a Script: Untitled Novel Chapter 1Padmé and Qui-Gonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16335420650850518200noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4944390983421509153.post-77695492430463838992010-08-30T14:50:52.799-07:002010-08-30T14:50:52.799-07:00Oopa, typo! Yes it should be black hair.
It's ...Oopa, typo! Yes it should be black hair.<br />It's only a first draft. xD<br />~Qui-GonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4944390983421509153.post-56582749410933114502010-08-30T14:48:20.225-07:002010-08-30T14:48:20.225-07:00I like it, Qui!
I do have one question about the s...I like it, Qui!<br />I do have one question about the second to last paragraph. Should it say, "I have black hair"<br />Instead of, "I have black" ?<br /><br />~PadméAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4944390983421509153.post-72079096363700144212010-08-30T14:15:46.707-07:002010-08-30T14:15:46.707-07:00Wow. That's really good. Having created a few ...Wow. That's really good. Having created a few nameless novels myself, I know that it's hard to come up with names. But keep working on it! I wanna see what happens next!Momma Too Manyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16539930921706357618noreply@blogger.com